Help me improve

[EvilDunkin]

need help to improve on my work. Here are some of my work. Please look at them and tell me what's good and bad (of course i need the title name of the piece that you comment)

make a wish
www.deviantart.com/deviation/32908949/

Ceiling of Confusion
www.deviantart.com/deviation/29636168/

::no name with bench::
www.deviantart.com/deviation/32908170/

no way out
www.deviantart.com/deviation/32908117/

flying fish cloud
www.deviantart.com/deviation/32090475/

sting ray cloud
www.deviantart.com/deviation/32090476/

purple skies
www.deviantart.com/deviation/32090466/

purple sky land bridge
www.deviantart.com/deviation/32090461/

NYC
www.deviantart.com/deviation/32089012/

say what the squirrel says
www.deviantart.com/deviation/31212712/

snow covered tree
www.deviantart.com/deviation/29448769/

interior of bag of goodies
www.deviantart.com/deviation/27762230/

I+love+you = more love
www.deviantart.com/deviation/27111639/

the snow sky and thick trees
www.deviantart.com/deviation/26177862/

snow upon trees
www.deviantart.com/deviation/26177833/

girl F
www.deviantart.com/deviation/22996317/

mathematical curves
www.deviantart.com/deviation/22996291/

girl d
www.deviantart.com/deviation/22809220/

lover's leap
www.deviantart.com/deviation/22782430/

snowmen
www.deviantart.com/deviation/22782407/

golden gate bridge
www.deviantart.com/deviation/22782378/

natural bridge
www.deviantart.com/deviation/22780034/

wishing fountain 1
www.deviantart.com/deviation/22713322/

zig zag bridge
www.deviantart.com/deviation/22642410/

niagra falls
www.deviantart.com/deviation/22642415/

shrine
www.deviantart.com/deviation/22642362/

[Karumichan]

The help/sugg topic is for the forum only, so I moved this to graphics, and made it so you can also put photography, and other crafts in here.

So, looking at these you just want comments on things like "it couldv'e been focused more, or zoomed in more, ect"? I'm no expert photograper, so I can just go on how I see things, and such.

[EvilDunkin]

oh can you?

experience or non experienced. as long as you have an artist's suggestion to it, it would be just fine for now. i cant find anything to help me on Deviantart yet =<

[Karumichan]

I won't do them all at once since I don't have alot of time, but for now:

#1) I think it could be alittle more focused in the forground.
#2) A bit hard to tell what it is, I don't know if a flash wouldv'e helped though
#3) I think it shouldv'e had all of the bench in the pic. And the door buzzer things take away that old victorian look.
#4) This one is really cool, maybe couldv'e been farther up to get the two green sings at the top in it, but it's still awsome.
#5) I don't see the fish...but it's very nice. I don't see anything to improve. The black land in the back is a really nice effect against the sunset though.

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[Karumichan]

#6) Like the other, I don't see the sting ray, but it's just as nice anyhow.
#7) 5px to the right.
#8) I think all of the bridge would've looked nice, but I don't know if you could fit it.
#9) Really cool. Maybe 10 px to the left though.
#10) lol, cute. He blends in so much too, it's like one of those find the animal pics. It is off center by a few px though.

[EvilDunkin]

#8 i couldnt take the pic of the bridge completely...bc it would kill what i was trying to capture sort of speak...but i'll try again

ooh ty so much for hte comments....so many more left lol

[Karumichan]

#11) Bootyful! It really looks nice. I think it's centered, maybe to the left 5 too many pixels, but it's hardly noticable.
#12) Lol, I love makin layouts for buildings. This is very cool. ^_^
#13) Looks like oil pastel? Pretty colors, I like the idea.
#14) Thats awsome. The cloud looks like a giant mountain. I think it looks perfect.
#15) This one too is great. I can see it being used in a magazine.

[EvilDunkin]

#13) it's actually chalky pastels lol not the oily ones

#15) it can be in a magazine? really? how so?

[Karumichan]

15 just looks like one of those images you could find in a nature mag or something. My parents get alot of those, so I see all sorts of those photos. It just looks really nice. A kodak moment. ^^;

[EvilDunkin]

ooh hot! that's cool! lol hmm mite do something w it haha

[Karumichan]

#16) Confuzzling, but looks cool. And it's big. O.o You should use a ruler to do all your straight lines. =)
#17) Very cool. Definitely looks like an assignment you'd get in art class for doing color wheel type stuffs.
#18) Pretty colors. Your teach is actually making a manga? Thats pretty awsome.

[EvilDunkin]

yeah....we did alot of comics cuz it was a comic as oral history class....so we were practicing techniques and stuff